- Delete the last sentence.
- Delete the second sentence.
- Find the part where I really struggle to make a point in a cute way and cut it from five sentences to one sentence.
- Make sure I didn’t use the same word to describe the album more than once, or twice at the most. If I did, delete half of the review and find something else to say about it, or take out a thesaurus.
- Reread. If I don’t cringe, it’s pretty much worthy of the internet.